The idea of causes and effects of the Great Depression and how the New Deal changed the government was considerable and unacceptable. The terms considerable and unacceptable because this topic is dealing with good and bad actions. Its important to understand this was a time were people wanted to improve. The government tried to help, this example shows how other people tried to learn about each other problems to help better communication. After analyzing these documents, I see a negative and positive impacts on historical themes culture and politics.
Firstly, the approaches of Hoover and FDR on how to handle the depression affected cultural in a positive way based on new presidents and old administrations. For instance, in source #1″ …president Roosevelt…launched a series of programs to ease effects of the Great Depression. In addition, the inaction of the government made things worse when the depression came along. This allows us to see people got the help they needed when FDR became president Hoovers way of business pushed people away. The way people lived in a lot of conflict. Because some presidents wanted to help and some didn’t
However, some may feel the causes of the Great Depression and how the government changes affected culture and politics in only a negative way. However the evidence in the text show this was not completely true.
In conclusion, the evidence strongly supports continuity in history. Based on the facts given elderly loses or gain power.
Decent Work! I focus on this sentence, “This allows us to see people got the help they needed when FDR became president Hoovers way of business pushed people away.” This sentence grabs my attention because it true base on the evidence and this sentence also can perfectly support your statement. For example, “President Roosevelt…launched a series of programs to ease the effects of the Great Depression. In addition, the inaction of the government made things worse when the depression came along” Providing this piece of evidence shows that the causes and effects of the Great Depression were considerable on Roosevelt part and unacceptable on Hoover part. However, this post made me feel informative due to facts that were given, but I also feel confused due to your grammatical errors. When I was reading your this-allow sentence, I knew what you were referring to context wise; however, you didn’t add punctuation so we can’t disguise who did what. In this part of your sentence, “people got the help they needed when FDR became president Hoovers way of business pushed people away.” You will need to add a period or a comma to separate parts of your sentence. In the future, I suggest you should finish your essay and fix your grammatical errors. Also, you should expand your essay to get the point across. I rate your work, a 2 out of a 3. What events about the Great Depression made some people feel that it was only a negative effect? Did the elderly gain or lose power doing the Great Depression?
Nice post. I was very focused on”This allows us to see people got the help they needed when FDR became president Hoovers way of business pushed people away. The way people lived in a lot of conflict.” I like your post cause you use very good evidence. I suggest you work on improvement. I give you a 3 out of 3. How did Hoover pushed them away?
Decent job! I would score your essay a 2. I mainly focus on this sentence,” The way people lived in a lot of conflict. Because some presidents wanted to help and some didn’t.” This statement gave me a good understanding of your perspective on what your are talking about.I really don’t see your choice in picture, that supports the idea of what your explaining. Next time, please give more evidence on your paragraph. My question is the great depression is still happening?
Wonderful job! I would score your work a 2 out of 3. I mainly focus on this sentence “This allows us to see people got the help they needed when FDR became president Hoovers way of business pushed people away.” This statement gave me a good understanding of your perspective. Next time, pick a picture that supports the topic and put it on your post. Your work gave me a great logic of your explanation by how the Great Depression made Americans go through traumatic experience with conflict and disobedience with counterculture. My question is Do you think that The Great Depression is going to happen again during the government shutdown with America in today’s society?
Nice work! I focused on “This allows us to see people got the help they needed when FDR became president Hoovers way of business pushed people away.” This grabbed my attention because I agree. This post made me feel like I know more about the situation. I suggest in the future you keep up the good work. Why didn’t you include a picture?
Great job ! I rate your work a 2 out 3. The reason I work a 2 out of 3 is because you could have added more detail to your conclusion and you didn’t have a picture. I mainly focused on the sentence, ” This allows us to see people got the help they needed when FDR became president Hoovers way of business pushed people away. ” I focused on this because, it stands out to me more and help me to better understand your essay. What would you do during the great depression times if you lived back then ?
Nice work! I focused on your this allows us to see sentence. In that sentence you stated, “This allows us to people got the help they needed when FDR became president Hoovers way of business pushed people.” This made me understand the topic a little more. I suggest you check over your work. There is a few mistakes. I rate your work a 2. Why did you choose the title?
[Extra Credit] Great Work !!! I rate this a 3 out of 3. the sentence I focus on is “This allows us to see people got the help they needed when FDR became president Hoovers way of business pushed people away. The way people lived in a lot of conflicts. Because some presidents wanted to help and some didn’t”. This grabs my attention because I agree with some of the things because you stated in your post. This made me feel good Because I understand some of the fings you stated in your post and even learn something. In the future, I would Watch your spelling. My question is what does your picture mean and how does it relate to your post?